Tuesday, April 13, 2021

Aubade for La Manzanilla

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The "short and sweet" prompt today, "write a poem in the form of a news article you wish would come out tomorrow," got me nowhere. I wrote a poem I don't understand based on that prompt but instead of confusing myself and anybody reading this I'm writing an aubade, a memory of a place I wish I could return to.




Aubade for La Manzanilla

 

 

that last day

            some of us hugging     

            some of us not

surely this 'flu will disappear in no time

surely we’ll be back at the end of the year

 

last look around in case we forgot something

pat the street dog goodbye

one last wave to Doña Chuy in her Frida-blue house

will she be here when we come back

 

            if we come back

 

so much can change in a year            

borders turn elastic

               snap shut

everything recast

 

we learn to mask      to wash      

stare at screens      eat too much

            play old tunes 

            start day drinking with a neighbour


                        tiny bubbles

 

rid ourselves of things we never use 

remember how we used to touch each other

crowd a dance floor 

blow out candles on a cake and eat it


back in La Manzanilla

Pedro is making fish tacos and margaritas the size of coconuts 


in the mangrove a crocodile slaps the water 

at sunset a symphony of birds returns to nest for the night


Laura Loca is singing

Lionel is selling his wife's almond cookies on the beach

as the sun falls into the sea


tomorrow we'll get torta piernas from Marta

to take on the flight

 

that last day

        surely this ’flu will disappear 

        surely we’ll be back 



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10 comments:

Mary Beth Frezon said...

This took me to the place. Many thanks

judydykstrabrown.com said...

This brought a few tears, Linda. Every detail struck a chord. oxox

Caroline Woodward said...

So poignant, so true, and here we are in 'third wave' wishing we could be elsewhere, anywhere this plague is not. Thank you for your beautiful poetry, Linda.

Selma said...

I already told you how much I loved this. I just felt like telling you again. (Hehe 😊) and I also shared something of yours on Twitter. Are you on Twitter? Say hi, 😉 please. Be well. I wish you miracles.

Gloria said...

I travelled with this poem. Thank you.

Linda Crosfield said...

Found it last night and followed you! Thank you a bunch!

Linda Crosfield said...

Thank you for reading, Gloria.

Linda Crosfield said...

You would know. Surely. ❤️

Linda Crosfield said...

Thank you for reading and commenting, Mary Beth.

Linda Crosfield said...

❤️