Today, the lune. From the horse's mouth of the NaPoWriMo website: "A lune is a sort of English-language variation on the haiku, meant to better render the tone of the Japanese haiku than the standard 5-7-5 format we all learned (and maybe loved) in elementary school. There are a couple of variants on the lune form, but just to keep things simple, let’s try the version developed by Jack Collum. His version of the lune involves a three-line stanza. The first line has three words. The second line has five, and the third line has three. You can write a poem that consists of just one stanza, or link many lune-stanzas together into a unified poem."
three more sleeps
then we have to leave
...until next year
We are now officially obsessed with leave-taking. How perfect, then, that the Spanish word for Monday, the day we head back north, is lunes.
This is Mexico
final Friday market
we find it has moved
so few vendors
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our sojourn ends
no more walks on beach
didn't miss snow
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palm frond bench for inky grackles passing through silhouettes on sky |
margarita, tequila sunrise, cervesa, piña colada, breakfast smoothies, agua mineral, coffee |
Pedro's fish tacos
truly best in the universe
one never enough
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Torta? she asks
Marta remembers what I like
feel at home
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Frida blue fence
I stop, take a picture
to remember it
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newly hatched tortoise
determined to reach the ocean
never stops moving
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Mondays and Thursdays
Iyengar yoga with Jo Anna
stretches body, soul
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sunset, Bambu Bar
writers gather on the beach
toss words around
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lesson for today
more clouds equals better sunset
there's a metaphor
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we move out
pigeons prepare to move in
this is Mexico
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4 comments:
Cheers to the 'lune'idst gal I know.
See you soon
Lunch out perhaps next week
I can't wait
HH
You're on! I can't wait either. Sending you an e. xo
Hi Linda! So fun to read your lunes and see your sunsets, uh, luna sets. Hope we keep in touch. Here is a link to my first 5 NaPoWriMo poems. I look forward to reading the rest of yours.
http://grieflessons.wordpress.com
Judy
Love your words.
Love your rich, colourful photos.
Love your smiles.
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