Thursday, April 16, 2015

A SPRING WALK PONDERING SORT OF POEM

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Tied, tied, tied up, getting ready for tomorrows poetry talk, so I'm not doing the prompt, I'm just doing something short.


SPRING WALK TO ZUCKERBURG ISLAND 
ALONG THE MILLENNIUM WALKWAY


River's low—
with sand to walk on, 
hiking boots 
not bare feet.

Sun warms 
but doesn't bake, 
peels layers off overdressed me.

I'm walking with the dead today, 
with Daniela who, 
only a few weeks ago 
was looking to buy a bike,

whose daughter will know her
through stories and pictures
as she flourishes, grows.

And I'm walking with Dalia
who taught me, who came from
a people who didn't then,
that it's okay to hug,

whose grandchildren will know her 
through stories and pictures 
that will have to do.

Current's swift—
wouldn't want to wade in too far. 
Sometimes living feels that way
but we splash in, regardless,

sinking, swimming,
and one way or another
we make it to shore.



Free verse. Four alternating four-, then three-line stanzas. Yet another exploration of this thing called life. We'll call it a Crosfieldian.

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1 comment:

Caroline Woodward said...

Beautiful. Tough, sad too. But beautiful.